My poem needs opinions.

Wow. That was an amazing adventure! You should really get it published...I know I'm saying it to pretty much everyone, but I mean you guys are really talented and gifted and all that ****. You have a great imagination and description and so many ways of looking at this poem. I mean you really are poetic. I love the last two lines. Also, when you are trying to publish this poem, don't get irate or melancholy that it didn't get published because there are so many publishing companies out there and one of them will get your poem published. So, keep your hopes up high and then let go of it and fly! Good luck!